Date: 2008-06-08 11:57 pm (UTC)
Huh, very dark, very intriguing.

Lee feels like another person in your story but after everything that has happened to him it's totally believable.

Two years ago, his father had wanted Lee dead. Now he must believe that Lee was, that both of his sons were. Lee hoped he frakking choked on it.

Really liked that sentence and the whole part about how Adama and the Galactica even survived Lee's mother ....

Am looking forward to the next parts!
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